I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great job on your blog post. I like how you have added how fun the game was and how the game was setted up. Maybe next time you could explain the rules but anyway good job and keep up the good effort.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
hi i love how you can retell some one ur storys why do you like playing sports and why???byyyeee
ReplyDeletehi my name is tahlia it looks great
ReplyDeleteHi Cristyn,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your blog post. I like how you have added how fun the game was and how the game was setted up. Maybe next time you could explain the rules but anyway good job and keep up the good effort.
-Shriya from your class Rm11