I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great job on your book review. These books look pretty cool and interesting. Maybe next time you could add a caption about why you posted this book review and which one would you prefer for us to read. What is your favorite book? Mine is about history about everything. Keep up the good effort.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on your book review. These books look pretty cool and interesting. Maybe next time you could add a caption about why you posted this book review and which one would you prefer for us to read. What is your favorite book? Mine is about history about everything. Keep up the good effort.
-Shriya from your class Rm11