I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello, I am Miro G and I am from Paroa school in greymouth. This was cool and showed that you shouldn't leave your computer on the floor, open. It had good animations. Maybe you should put out more ways that you can break your computer. Thanks! Miro
Hello,My name is Emma from paroa school in greymouth. I enjoyed this short animation very much. I like how you kept it short so it didn't take long to read. To be BTB you could add more punctuation. Bye:)
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Hello, I am Miro G and I am from Paroa school in greymouth.
ReplyDeleteThis was cool and showed that you shouldn't leave your computer on the floor, open. It had good animations.
Maybe you should put out more ways that you can break your computer.
Thanks!
Miro
Thank you Miro G for the comment I will be sure to do more
DeleteHello,My name is Emma from paroa school in greymouth.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this short animation very much.
I like how you kept it short so it didn't take long to read.
To be BTB you could add more punctuation. Bye:)
Thank you Emma for the comment :)
DeleteHi my name is Dion that was quick but thoughtfull to tell people some consquences to what happens when you leave your stuff everywhere.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dion for commenting and that is truly correct
DeleteHi my name is Diaz form ahipara school that was quick but thoughtfull to tell people what happens when you leave your stuff everywhere.
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